Today you worked on revising your thesis statements, using the thesis-opinion continuum. I modeled revision, using our beautiful Elmo! You noted the difficulty of creating a "high interest" thesis statement. On the first try, many of your creations were "opinions," stating the obvious or stating your opinion too generally or too specifically. But we made progress!
The Good News: You will not write the baseline essay until next week. More information to come!
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
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